tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19155612.post8464651412363511009..comments2024-03-20T12:03:15.567-05:00Comments on Arem Arvinson Log: at eveningRalph Murrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02094202815537604157noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19155612.post-30316512907820973362014-03-23T09:27:10.492-05:002014-03-23T09:27:10.492-05:00Thanks, Jennifer. I suppose those closing lines, ...Thanks, Jennifer. I suppose those closing lines, if written as prose, would go something like, "Could the colored rays of our shining BE the western sky at evening?", and maybe that's how the poem should read, but I like it as is.Ralph Murrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11949171899797301924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19155612.post-89546000643558342872014-03-22T17:50:05.738-05:002014-03-22T17:50:05.738-05:00I really love the sentiment with this. For some r...I really love the sentiment with this. For some reason though, I stumble over part of it, like my brain is missing a word or phrase. It's just me, don't worry.<br /><br />It is a lovely piece.Jennifer Ruth Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04699005759754946494noreply@blogger.com