Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Again with the Haiku?

this low flying flock
the color of dried beech leaves
hear their flapping wings

- arem


Pam said...

Thanks for the wonderful haiku. I just wrote four haiku and am trying to figure out which three to submit for a contest.

writerwoman said...

The last line I can actually hear. Its like I am within the scene you describe.