Sunday, November 04, 2007

Chuckles



chuckles of a pram-boat
on wavelets
haunting laugh of loon
quiet evening shower
tears of the crescent moon

-Ralph Murre

4 comments:

mimi said...

what on earth is a "lapstrake pram?"

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Ralph Murre said...

you're right, mimi - the poem is lost if it needs explanation. I've rewritten it.