I really love the sentiment with this. For some reason though, I stumble over part of it, like my brain is missing a word or phrase. It's just me, don't worry.
Thanks, Jennifer. I suppose those closing lines, if written as prose, would go something like, "Could the colored rays of our shining BE the western sky at evening?", and maybe that's how the poem should read, but I like it as is.
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I really love the sentiment with this. For some reason though, I stumble over part of it, like my brain is missing a word or phrase. It's just me, don't worry.
It is a lovely piece.
Thanks, Jennifer. I suppose those closing lines, if written as prose, would go something like, "Could the colored rays of our shining BE the western sky at evening?", and maybe that's how the poem should read, but I like it as is.
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